I turn my head and have to stop mid-sentence
When I see my boyfriend sitting next to his roomy
And then a foot from the other male
Comes up and rests upon my boyfriend's knee
And I have to cock my head for a second
I am slightly concerned
But I roll my eyes and laugh
And forget what I was going to say next
Author notes
word: concern
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A cute take on the prompt word that you've chosen. I like the scene, it plays out well in the mind and is easily relatable. Good job.
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Very thought provoking immagery you crafted with a wonderful notion through the words of this poetry here..well one...
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nice one,
i wonder what you have forgot to say,.. lol..
keep it up!!
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i dunno. i forgot lol
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