I’m wrapped in the blankets of guilt
And shackled by the chains of regret.
Did keeping me as your prisoner
Bring you amusement.
Had causing me this intolerable pain
Given you some sort of sick thrill.
I’ve had enough
I’m sick of your mind games,
You dragged me down into your grave
For so long, but I will not follow you down anymore.
I’ll no longer be your useless doll,
The one you dressed up
To be exactly what you wanted.
I’m leaving you behind
No more will I be captivated
By your gorgeous yet cynical eyes
Or the sound of your soothing voice.
I’m erasing you from my life
So don’t except a kiss goodbye.
I’m walking away without regret.
Cause Darling, you’re no good for me
Author notes
Just randomly started writing this... kind of just went with my muse I guess.
Please tell me what you think
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I'd like to beat the crap out of the guy who made you feel hurt and used like this. Seriously I'll throw the first punch. Anyways, I like this, it's quite strong and emotional. good work
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wow this is amazing. I loved it! ;D
excellent start to finish ...
at one point it kinda reminded me of something i have written a while back.. haha.
Great job!
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Well, then I have to say your muse is definitley taking you places.
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No more will I be captivated
By your gorgeous yet cynical eyes
Or the sound of your soothing voice.
- i liked that part a lot because it was showing the good and bad in someone.
this is a good write. definitly had my attention. -
Oh Nicole I love this one so much! its so amazing and powerful to what im thinkin its related to. <3
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A powerful write
Your words have strong emotions and passion behind
It's clear and evident that you are unhappy with your current situation, based off how you are being treated (according to the poem)
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wow this is a very beautifully written piece. you really got the point across. also there is so much anger and passion here. great job!
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I've been down this road and it's never a pretty one. This poem is beautiful and shows your strength perfectly. You have a wonderful sense of vocabulary too. Most people who try to use better words tend to go overboard, but that's certainly not the case here. Great Work!
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Ambiguous last stanza, slightly painful. I'm not sure if you intended it to be anything like that. Overall, effective write. Naturally done and I wouldn't change it, or it's angry yet still strong nature.
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