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These Voices

Taunting me, screaming
Can't handle truths
That could be lies
Snaking through my mind
Killing me slowly
With torture

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 29, 2008

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    Yes..I agree with the truth you shared here..this is the image of the life..and the fact of the world as wee..well said...


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry in the contest. An interesting poem that I can relate to. I hope, if you have voices that they will quieten down...

    All the best...Sue