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Evolution of men




there are those
that have evolved,
gone with the flow

become human
in form and mind

but alas,
some just never
seem to grow
with the time
and remain
foolish monkeys forever


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  • spiritualangel
    December 23, 2008
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    Well done. Best of luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    ha ha lol a fantastic take onthe promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Cannonsfire
    November 22, 2008

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    LOL You remember the saying 'monkey see, monkey do'?
    Well i reckon we can change it to Pirate see, Slayer do LMAO.... C


  • Angelflower
    November 21, 2008

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    And you can tell those from the others too. They tend to steal all the hair.... lol. this was a very cute and thought provoking poem good luck in the contest.


    Angel