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Maybe Version Two

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This is an original tune composed and vocal performance by my friend Steve Smith.
If you too would like your lyrics turned into a real song his email address is
steve@musicsmith.co.uk

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4513311

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  • Harlequin
    December 2, 2008
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    good write good music Craig. Managed to get my player working...Well done...Jeff

  • soulseer
    November 23, 2008
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    very nice very nice not my taste but good


  • lovesky
    November 23, 2008
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    That was unbelievably briliant!
    I cried too !

  • patrick20traveler
    November 23, 2008
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    I cried.


  • dame de la riviere
    November 22, 2008

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    Hey darlin', It's so neat to hear your words put to music! I think that friend of yours did a good job wiht the tune.


  • arafura gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    I think this is very good. Your friend is talented and has an unusual, but appealing, voice. Good luck to both of you!

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