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Relatively Speaking

“Well, I’ll be a monkey’s uncle”
is a phrase used by more than a few.
Although technically, if Darwin was right,
it’s more like I’m his nephew.

Now I’m not here to argue
whether evolution’s wrong or right.
Too many folk would get their panties
twisted.  I’m not here to incite.

We’re all from the same origins
no matter which Master your serve.
So shouldn’t each living creature
be treated with respect they deserve?

Anyone who mistreats an animal
diminishes the humanity of all.
I’d find it difficult to offer forgiveness
but I’d try after he’s hung by his (expletives).



Author notes

Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: www.googleimages.com
20 – 100 words (and I used them all )

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  • spiritualangel
    December 23, 2008

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    Anyone who mistreats an animal
    diminishes the humanity of all.
    I’d find it difficult to offer forgiveness
    but I’d try after he’s hung by his (expletives).

    Beautifully penned. Best of luck.


  • BluesMan gold member
    December 17, 2008
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    Great message and humor to boot Great write

  • montez gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    I can empathise with...

    ..the message, but I seem to be having difficulty with the flow of the piece.
    I DO feel it could be improved, but it's not a bad effort though.
    Have a bit of the clap.
    R.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    I enjoyed reading this. You did an excellent job with the prompt. I really liked the last two stanzas, strong message within this poem that you've written.

    good luck


  • Lucy.
    November 22, 2008

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    Bravo! Wonderful message...and your usual cheeky humour.

    AND...spelling error, line 2. 'by more'
    You have no idea how much I've missed picking up on your spelling. Thank you! You probably put it there on purpose just for me to find.

    Anyway, send me a message when you get a chance and let me know how you're going. We're all fantastic over here. Will get some photos up soon too.

    Speak soon.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    ha ha a brilliant take onthe promt good luck in the contest maralisa


  • sailor ptolema
    November 21, 2008
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    . go adaptations!

  • sailor ptolema
    November 21, 2008
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