longing to hear words from your lips
speaking to me of amazing and wondrous things
confirming the belief we hold close
of trust and special meaning received
when striking from the sky
a thunderbolt of silence intrudes
leaving me searching for the essence
that is the beautiful voice of my dreams
Author notes
The prompt----- 'VOICES'
A contest entry
- Amaze Me With Your Words by Sue Cardwell.
1750 points, ended November 26, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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superb
well written, well done friend -
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thank you
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Thank you for your entry in the contest. A beautiful poem and a great take on the prompt.
All the best...Sue
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such a beautiful voice you have. Wonderous words and loving thoughts creating voices we all wish to share within. You have not missed a beat and what a great take on the prompt. Alive and full of light....my first instinct when I seen it was the insane mind...lol. Well done as I believe you will amaze many with this piece. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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