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war knocking at my door!

I am so tired,so weary,
Lord please help me regain strength,
for me to stand and fight once more,
for all that love you more,
may peace cover them in and out of the core,
while walking this street,
thinking about the sadliness streaks,
that runeth down my cheek,
once I am happy I wiill live furthermore,
since there is no WAR knocking at my front door.

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  • DramaQueen469
    April 6, 2009

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    I know what you mean *sigh*

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    Maria


  • Unique Utopia
    December 9, 2008

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    excellent

    this was very good...but i wonder, why u have time to write poetry, but not answer my messages!
    ur gurl,
    Jamaicanqueens