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Snack Thief

 

 

 

Thinking they had gotten rid of me,

I followed them back to their truck.

I hitched a ride on the tail gate,

trying my best not to get caught.

 

They flew quickly across the freeway,

and stopped at the corner store.

Where the wife picked up some bananas,

cookies, snacks, and more.

 

The kids were busy snacking,

as I made my way to the trunk.

I grabbed the bunch of bananas,

and decided to give them a dunk.

 

Into the wife's hot cup of coffee,

it surely made my day.

She probably won't remember,

hey, she can't prove it anyway!

 

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  • spiritualangel
    December 23, 2008

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    Into the wife's hot cup of coffee,
    it surely made my day.
    She probably won't remember,
    hey, she can't prove it anyway!


    HaHaHa.. what a good scheming. Well done. Excellent.


    • Jeremy0826 silver member
      December 23, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the Gold!
      I appreciate it and am glad that you enjoyed it!


      Jeremy0826


  • BluesMan gold member
    December 17, 2008
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    Ah that pesky chimp. This was a cute write chimps a born trouble makers


  • maralisa silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    ha ha a brilliant take on the promt good luck inthe contestmarailsa


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 22, 2008

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    lol, okay this is classic, that is what i love about this poem i enjyed this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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