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Short-lived ecstacy

Concretely
temporary
feeling.

Fleetingly blissful.

Devouring
the moment

with you...

A contest entry

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  • xeroabyss II
    February 18

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    Kinda sounds like five minutes in the backseat...or that 15 seconds of time when passed a certain someone in the halls between classes.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 20, 2008

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    A smiling piece is here..a beauty is shared and poetry is created by the bliss of the love..well done...thanks for sharing..


  • sol-luna
    November 22, 2008
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    thanks


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    creatively engaging... x