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What a Beautiful Day

what a nice night with a nice chill
i sit on the bench perfectly still
the grass is shining, soaked with dew
the luminescent orbs remind me of you

i wish you were here you would love this night
i wish you did not have to work. damn it! its just not right!
i miss you. please come back soon
you may be making money but its niether blessing nor boon

when you finally return, just grant me this wish
i would like you to grant me just one kiss...

Author notes

a guy like me should not be writing this kind of poetry but im doing it for a contest

A contest entry

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