Desperately i long
for the moment
that did not last
yet for me
will never end
Every time she looked
into my eyes she saw
what i did not show
yet in her eyes
i saw myself
for the first time
Never have i met
a robot that
brought out so much
feeling and passion
out of me
I have never again
relived that moment
yet part of me
has never stopped living
in that moment
So i go on living
in two moments
the moment that
passes by
and the moment
i never left
Expecting some day
that for me
moments will be no more
i know in my heart
that my last will be
the moment i never left
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Written February 4th, 2004
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she slucky to have someone who holds those words for her... this is sweet and really heartfelt. its also well set out
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The subject of this poem used to call herself a robot, not feeling any emotions. A little hint, look at the first letter of every paragraph. It well tell who the subject is. I wanted to see if she would pick-up on it. She is a very good poet on this site.
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hey great poem, but why did you call the girl a robot? it was a great poem overall, good job on it.
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there seems to be a lot of robot talk today great write are you speaking of a relationship with a robot, just curios
spank you
naughty
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