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My Name is Illegible

Alternate Title "A Change Of Heart Face"

It is time...

One in a while

A person must make a choice

That will alter the tide of

Reality itself.

And though as it seems

'Unnecessary",

Dr. Cube will have

A new face.

The torture of the Cube

Will ultimately end,

But a new obstruction

Will haunt the population

Strait into their hearts.

True, though, the name

Dr. Cube

Will remain the same.

But the presonna

The personality

The conflict

And the energy

will be subject to change.

It is here...

and soon, in a few days time,

Will you see

The new Dr. Cube

Author notes

The face that is Dr. Cube will be changed. No longer the Cube dome of a head, but something more...sinister looking.

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  • DeadPuppet
    January 20

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    Confuzzled?

    This Is "ODD"
    but i like it [:

    There Seems To
    Be So Much Going
    On In This.

    I Feel For Ya, Dr. Cube

  • discosunshine
    January 11

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    I love it! This is the first I read, hopefully I will read more of yours.

    The torture of the Cube
    Will ultimately end,
    But a new obstruction
    Will haunt the population
    Strait into their hearts.
    ------
    This is just straight up awesome.


  • xxpenandpaperxx
    December 20, 2008
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    strange

  • mcope8050
    December 4, 2008

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    very nice,,, the whole change thing is sooo common among us all, I like how you "put a face " on the idea, I can't wait to read more of your work,,, thanks for sharing

  • Deathless1
    December 1, 2008

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    i have seen all the faces of dr.cube!!
    even the real one...
    and i would have to say that is my favorite.
    great write


  • Sir Squigglim
    November 29, 2008
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    this is really good. It's rather entertaining, too.

    Be yourself but change... I like it.

  • word20dragon
    November 24, 2008

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    Great write

    I like your poem it is sort of a declaration to yourself to be yourself but yet be open to change, examine the change before you embrace it as a whole, once you except the change you know the change might not be perminent that is what being humans all about change and how we have to roll with the punches and if we get knocked to the canvas brush yourself off stand on your two feet and we stick our chins out again. Great write so roll with the punches and change.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 22, 2008

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    interesting my friend, i like this poem kind of a rebirth you could call it, keep it flowing, and hope to see more for you.

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