Oh God
the way I endure ,grin and contemplate
is the occultism
which determines me that you are the
diviner behind me,
and I am one of your feature
I am at astonishment
that how do you govern your distinguished panorama
precisely, when an ordinary person like me
is refined by your blessings
yet, undergo with a sense of sentenced
by not replying you in the gentlemanly decorum
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Such is Life by just mercedes.
4000 points, ended December 3, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hGod...
Comments
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'refined by your blessings' made me think. This is a good response to the prompt, thank you for this entry.
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The image you've chosen here reminds me of the creature Grendl from Beowulf, yet the text seems almost sardonic in its tone of 'I am what I am, nothing more' ...which is exactly what the contest asked for" Such is life"..well done. Best wishes in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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This made me think of the potter and the wheel...I have no illusions as to who is the clay lol and good luck in the contest
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very interesting! Made me have to think... that's a feat in itself. lol!
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