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Righteous Indignation

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You invited me over.
  I came.

I knocked down your
locked door
with my intention
per your request
and there
you are
          in bed
with him.

I learned that what it all
boils down
to is
sex.
      Lonesome sex;
As true blue as
a chameleon. May
I suggest
real rebellion:
monogamy.

And, come again,
you want
ME...


...you want me to get over what?





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  • ea silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    I guess this would be jealousy wearing a cowboy hat.


    • paulcreates silver member
      November 22, 2008
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      Well more like justified indignation. Jealousy happens only to those who care, not to the care-less.
      Thank you Marcy for your comment.
      Paul


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Perfect title for this poem..it says it all.

    ~ Nicolette