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Little Red

Through the frost
A magical flutter
Heart pounding
A winter shutter
I soar through a mountain of white
For this is my playground
Day and night
Little Red
In sight
Like a piece of paper
I float to the ground
And land on my magical white playground

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  • White Tiger 96
    November 23, 2008

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    Amazing!!

    I think you did a wonderful job on this. It sounds so pretty. Thanks for your entry!! Keep Writing, I hope to read more from you!!