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Growing Up




she swings
                      from
            a tree
   
before- 
             

          bare feet

become…
                    rubber




Author notes

picture inspired
painted by; Jenedy Paige

http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Item/4797/9.jpg?1227316984

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  • Naughtygrlred
    November 23, 2008
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    cute


  • suseann
    November 22, 2008

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    Cute image linked. And all that barefootin playin does create callouses of rubbered soles.Nice work .


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    I saw the picture and your clever words put it in perspective
    rubber feet would indeed come in handy as we grow,
    it would help us to keep getting back up.

    you are very clever
    God bless you...


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Wonderful interpretation of the contest prompt. Simply love where you took it and where these 10 words took my mind!!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 21, 2008
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    so creatively engaging... x


  • Kari gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    For some reason I had the song George of the jungle pop in my mind when I read this. I love the format you've turned this into..I'm swinging with you!

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