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With you

My hand in yours
Enbrassed in a long warm hug
together now
and forever
thankfull to be alive and here,
all i need to do is look in the mirror
see you beside me,
and it all becomes clear.

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i am not sure i did this right, but its postive lol and i tried!

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  • Star Shine
    November 28, 2008

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    It is very positive indeed, and makes a very personal statement. I totally identify as I am so grateful for my wonderful husband and love of my life.