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Flowing childhood tires

memory deep,
Swinging sweet.
Childhood creeps,
Among swings
Shall  reap

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painted by ~ Jenedy Paige

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 21, 2008
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    very creative... x


  • Kari gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Yes. I can imagine that the memories there would be deep and the swinging sweet.
    Nice job and best of luck in the contest