Midnight sky whose beauty
Radiates from above
Hope, and temptation
Shine its light on my love
People ask me why I gaze,
But I can’t reply for I’m in a daze
That light that illuminates from
Above; only shines for my heart to love
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A contest entry
- Fully by Mari Goes.
1300 points, ended November 22, 2008, 17 entries
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Does it flow okay?
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aww this was beautiful!
I loved reading this! You did so well with this piece! I loved how you could say so much in so little words; its hard for some people to be able to do that but you managed to do that just beautifully. You have a talent for writing poetry; I could see you going far. I loved this piece! Such beautiful flow and depth in this. I thought your imagery was fantastic in this, as well as the phenomenal emotions in this poem. BRAVO! WOW! this was an amazing piece! thanks for sharing it! keep up the good work!
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WOOOOOW!!
We have a winner! I love this poem, absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you for your kind words hun.
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Awe, this such a beautiful write. it's very interesting and a very enjoyable read this is so creative and unique never read something like this before this is such a heart warming piece therefore its awesome keep up the brilliant work my friend and happy holidays =D
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Awww thank you so much for your compliment it really warms my heart to get those
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aww. I love it. it's so sweet. great flow, it held my intrest. really nice job. keep up the good work.
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Thank you, I am glad that I could hold your interest. Thats all I was really wanting to accomplish. That being said your comment means the world to me.
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aww i love this... i really do!!!
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Awww why thank you; that means a lot to me
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I many times keep on staring at the moon, I just can't get enough of her beauty.
Your poems is very romantic, and that is what the moon inspires, among other feelings.
Thank you
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I like this, very nice poem.
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Thank you for your kind words. They mean the world to me!
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You are very welcome TaintedSamurai1
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