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I am an American!

Oh my gosh... I'm going away
am I really leaving today?
The day has come to leave my home
and start a new life at Camp Shampome
I never thought this day would come
but yet it has, now I sit here numb
Thinking of what I'm leaving behind
friends, family, all in my mind
I'll fight for my country
I will fight until the end
even if my body in a bag they do send
I stand for the colors red, white, and blue
for I am a soldier, standing proud and true!

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  • Maxboy gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    A wonderful story you have pulled from the prompt, a story repeated to often.

    Well Done....Best wishes in the contest