I am illusion for reality is pain
Watch all the cameras standing in rain
Next time you see me
I'll be watching you
For I am the reflection
You are whats true
I stand here wondering
If we all really exist
Or if we are just the imagination
Of one who created us
and now we persist
A world that's degrading
And fading away
Soon the day will be over
and night will come to stay
Will it all just end
and we become just star-spray
Onward to forever infinity
particles of yesterday
and tomorrow becomes today
A contest entry
- Reality vs. Illusions by Suicide Hotline.
700 points, ended December 28, 2008, 33 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this was great! i loved it, thanks for your entery =)
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i honestly don't know what to say about this poem that you have done here, but it pretty much left me in awe, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Excellent
Ah, 'tis a fine write, indeed. Has some elements from metaphysical writings like: Seth Speaks; by Jane Roberts, as well as, various theosophical writers. Again, well done. If you are any of your readers, would like more information about Jane Roberts and Seth Speaks, here's a Google link to click on:
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