Innocent discoveries -
create fantasies,
yesterdays boundary -
todays inspiration,
tomorrows dream.
Author notes
painting by ~ Jenedy Paige
A contest entry
- In ten words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yes it does Well done!!! congrats on bronze!
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Wow. This is amazing. Congratulations on the Bronze. Well deserved
Much love
Ylova
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this is really good..
Keep on writing..
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i like how yyou started of. we all seem to be so innocent on the swings. as our dreams take flight.
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Wonderfully written, those moments of youth when anything was possible shine eithin. Congratulations on the Bronze award.
Best to you,
Mouser
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OH! lovely imagery and a child's heart captured well..Congrats on the bronze!
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excellent poem! i like the first line the best... they all stand so well on there own.. and each has its own deep meaning when you think about it.. but innocent discoveries jumped out at me.
Best wishes to you as well
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Beautiful !!!
"Innocent discoveries-
create fantasies,"
Lovely...well done.
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Beautiful...best wishes
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This is just captivating.... x
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Aww... this is adorable, and i feel thats how a child feels everytime they leave the house.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Rose -
I like it
Very cute,
short and sweet ~ Yen
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Fantastic!
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