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Wheather

Cool, calm, collected;
But oh so corroded and cracked.
Drawing maps to distraction,
Decieving dead ends,
And placid pitfalls.
Light me a candle
Just to blow it out.
Laugh in my face
To show me I'm not worthy.

Day in and day out,
Sunset to sunrise.
Lost in tragedy unwanted.
Blocked off exits,
Regression, regret.
Strike me a match
Just to watch me burn.
Turn your back and walk
To prove that I am alone.

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