There's beauty in the mirrors of the winter.
Reflecting her innocence from the sky.
There's beauty in the tender heart within her.
I saw it in a teardrop in her eye.
If only I could reach out now and touch her.
To save her from the lonely hands of night.
If only I could feel her heart beat near me.
Then once again things would be alright.
If today was less than such a longtime.
If the past was not so overgrown.
If tomorrow was a chosen footstep.
I'd follow it to the love I've known.
Yes, if only time had waited.
Oh if only she had'nt passed my by.
If only she was here to wittness.
The love that god will now deny.
I can't see my hand before me.
I can't speak the sounds of my pain.
I cannot hear the sounds of laughter.
Only memories remain.
Yes but only once again to feel her.
To feel her breath upon my face.
If I could build a future.
I would find my resting place.
Author notes
I am sincerely sorry to hear your sad news,I hope you are ok. This piece is obviously coming from a male perspective but I hope it captures some tender emotional thoughts. I don't know what else to say, I just hope that time right now is kind to you.
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- loosing a loved one by karas.
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Comments
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Desperately Beautiful.
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this is beautiful, and so very touching,, well done on this, good luck in the contest,
Krystal
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