The King foolishly disrobed
Listening to those who wished him harm
He listened only to what they proposed
Never thinking ,Unsoundly, there was no alarm
Be-careful of those who advise you
Or you might end up out in the cold
Listen to yourself and think things through
Be wise and your heart won't grow old
The King humiliated by his Disrobe scene
Looked helplessly at his understanding Queen...
Author notes
I'm talking about the fairytale...if you're not familiar ask me and I will explain it.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (D) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great story
I thought this was wonderful and it has so many points of view, I like it a lot.
TC
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soo touching!
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Sound advice here..well done again dear
All the best in the contest!
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Sweet here loving here, A lesson learned from an amazing story...
The king!(kong),
Antonio
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I think this is a very good piece. I like the storyline of it. For the most part it does flow well but there a are a couple spots that seem to snag a bit. Overall, I like it alot though
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