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My Typical Thoughts






She resents the fact
that other women have
slept in my bed

but that was before her


I resent the fact
she has slept with
other men

but that was before me --

and I resent it even more

Author notes

The prompt----- 'VOICES'

A contest entry

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry in the contest. I love your take on the prompt, very unusual and strong, I enjoyed reading this.

    All the best...Sue


  • Hebe
    November 22, 2008
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    simple, but so much is said in a few lines. another great poem!!!

    hebe


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    WOW!

    This is great! Concise, pointed, and BAM! at the end. (I still don't understand what the stuck-up poets had going on -- you write beautifully!)


    • afroqban
      November 21, 2008
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      why thank u, that was very nice of you. really put a smile on my face. much love and respect to you