Since you left I have found this power inside me
A power neither of us ever knew I had
This strong, unbreakable power, that pushes me on
That teaches me that I am worth all that and more
So let me tell you, Dearest Daniel
That what you did to me will never be forgotten
Nor will I ever be as weak as to forgive
I shall never again cry for you and your selfish, unbearable lies
Oh Danny Boy don't you know what you have done?
You alone are responsible for how strong I have become
You alone took away my support and made me find my own strength
You made me this strong, this unbreakable, this powerful
And in doing this did you not make yourself weak?
Did you not leave yourself open to be broken?
The way that you, once upon a time, broke me
And now, Dear Daniel, it is your time to fall!
I shall watch you beg and plead
Cry and scream
Fall and crawl
And I shall smile and LAUGH!
This power I have found came from you
And the torment you put me through
Oh Danny Darling, did your mother not warn you?
''What doesn't kill her, will only make her stronger''
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6. Power!
TeenageTears
A contest entry
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Comments
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hmm power with a mix of revenge huh.. thats the impression i got, which of course is not bad.. its kinda strange and interesting.. 3rd stanza is the best! i must say proudly you have captured coincidentally what i have experienced, though i do not have any bitter feelings for her(in my case its a girl) and in my case i do not want to see her fall but to prosper happily, cause i am thankful, perhaps cause of under different circumstances than you i guess and you know why, simple just reread your last stanza, to be truly strong is to let go of all that (i must guess)hatred, for you think you have grown stronger, but it is weak to hate, and strong to forgive, time will come he will learn just dont force it.. oh dear i ended up relating and advicing for what i thought should be a quick fast comment..
long comments w/o clappies would be awful right? here you go
well done thought unfortunately it's not what im looking for, still is a commendable effort 
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