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Proverb

Without faith, there would be no hope.
Without hope, there would be no will.
Without will, there would be no passion.
Without passion, there would be no life.
Without life, there would be nothing.

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My very first proverb. Tell me if it doesn't seem right, makes no sense, is written wrong, ect. I want to know.

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  • Tyl3r
    November 25, 2008
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    Sounds like you stole my title. Just kidding. Good one.