"Such is life",
I'm at the stage,
past fixed mistakes,
as a way to be.
That kind of place,
beyond extreme,
without a stake,
bearing belief.
A contest entry
- Such is Life by just mercedes.
4000 points, ended December 3, 2008, 37 entries
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Comments
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The final line of this shines back up through the poem, illuminating it. Well done, thank you for this entry.
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someone told me I might be banned
and it didn't worry me -
Nice take on the prompt! Sharp and to the point!
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Yee-Hah!
Sounds like you've reined yourself in...not so much settled for captivity but found an inner peace with the past and the self searching of not being a sheep that needs herding...neither one of the herd nor ready to be displayed in a gallery as artistry unless it's on your terms...beyond extreme...but not beyond your own boundaries...you remain open to new pastures...new venues...the futures orange ( oops that's a cellphone commercial ) the futures in allotments...grow your own green and continue to grow...this rambling was bought to you by the lady rotating a figure of eight lol ...though in truth the hoops are earrings....
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