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To Become Someone Great Someday

I see the sadness in your eyes,
as you try to hide it.
i see the anger in your actions,
as you try to stop it.
If you want to quit, on this life,
make you want to run away and hide,
put on a fake facade to show your being oprimistic,
but really, i see through you like a window,
and i can be there for you when you let yourself go.
when you try to not let it show... it  makes the matter worse,
it hurts. don't let yourself continue to be happy, when your not inside,
talk to someone, talk to me, don't pretend when,
you have a friend.
look up into sky and see the clouds float by slowly,
don't think that they are symbolic for you being lonely,
then someday, when you have confidence in yourself,
i can tell, you will be able to stop the act,
and live a normal life with us all, break down the wall,
you can become whatever you like if you can accomplish this,
that's what living really is.

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If anyone can relate to this i hope it helps, i relate to this most of the time.

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 25, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • starving4perfection
    November 23, 2008

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    i can relate to it i LOVE it!
    its very well written...nd its tru 4 alot of ppl
    good write! keep it up!