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Breathless

 

 

 

 

 

 

cleansed

enwrapped in perfect love

breath escapes me

 

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 2

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    Ah..I agree with the confession made here..very much impressive statement you made here..and very much definate as well..well done...


  • Denerica
    January 1

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    I loved this immensly...in such a few short words you captured...cleansed...with love...so breath! Awesome message to me.


  • Denerica
    January 1
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    OOOOHHHHH


  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    ....and breath escapes me as I read this beautiful piece. Short, simple and yet utterly profound in its meaning. I love it!