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That Tune Again

 

 

 

You know what it’s like when you just hear that tune
the one you don’t like at all,
it’s on in the morning around about noon
or shopping while down at the mall.

It’s stuck in your mind as if held there by glue
you wish the damn song would just go,
your feelings have changed but the memories grew
although you have nothing to show.

Now years down the line and it still has it’s place
but somehow you smile with the thought,
and it’s hard to distinguish the look on his face
old memories the music just brought.

The tune may still echo inside of your mind
bringing back ghosts from the past,
the years travel backwards, life seems to rewind
but will it continue to last?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • malmadre gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Most everyone has that one special song that takes them back in time, hopefully a good time. I love to go in those places that play the oldies. Your rhyme is wonderful, you are one of the most versatile writers.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Oh, THAT song! -- Yes, I've one of the those, too! I don't know how you are able to write so well on almost every subject -- your rhymes are always on point, and every line flows so well.
    Another fine write!


  • arafura gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Ah yes... I remember it well.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Oh yes we all know THAT song
    and that one
    and that one

    ...