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One Day

One long day
brought sadness
to my heart

My grandpa died.
although i was
very young

I don't remember
much about
that day

But i saw
him again
one night.

It was like
he was checking
up on me.

I saw him
in the computer
room.

It scared me
so much.

But i never
saw him
  again

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  • Ryan79
    December 15, 2008
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    Wow. It's so sweet. Short and honest. I feel for you.

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    November 21, 2008
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    this was an amazing poem. keep it up!!! it took my breath away and the sadness felt so real like i was experiencing it. keep up the good work!


  • ShadowWeaver
    November 21, 2008
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    awesomeazingness!