your stellar green motions lift the corners of my mouth
turn them unpside down (which is to say
right side up)
and i realize the upside of down isn't so far off from on.
and your thoughts are long and curly and shine
like rusty nails. i like the authenticity.
ha
laughter.
necessity.
floating music.
breaking sun sealed secrets
tightened in your little layered lungs
that exhaust and perfume when performed
society is the stretching skin of the unfolding, unchanging molecular
make - up of matching marching meltingpots.
there's a tree delivering bones to the worthy souls
about its trunk
and spouting sap at those between here and there
but i only taste when the tone matchs your breath
and i see the vibrations of your heart in your tongue;
open wide and wide open to those delicate yesterday turnovers:
tasty twisting tales of youth and imagination hiding in shadows
until swallowed soulfully and the belly bloats with innocence.
all those farther moments
that lurk from under the bed and grab my ankle when
wandering through a cold breezy afternoon: stale
but i close my eyes to such a blaze
refocus
center
travel and unravel in mind melds with flowering
gypsies from the center of the universe where the
image of home becomes the new alien taste on my lips
that i tend to fall awake to
Please tell me what you think
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best that i have read today so much amazing word choice very well writen
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Very Enjoyable
You have some really neat metaphors in this poem. Shines like rusty nails, I really liked that one. The vibrations of your heart in your tongue= beautiful. Strong finish, great poem.
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Beautiful. The beginning feels both fractured and fluid and once, and I like it. I think it flows very well and paints a very vivid image.
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nice...
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GSM
I havent read much lately but this is GSM the best thing ive read in some time.
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