renewal.
that word always came to mind when I thought of the
bone-chilling dust that fell when you exhaled
and saw your breath hang in front of you.
Author notes
whatami.
http://samuraidave.wordpress.com/category/zao-onsen/
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt - snow, winter... by aboomer.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Impressive!
That's just about all I can think of to say about this poem! It's different and convolute! I'll have to come back and read it again. The imagery, Japanese cultural reference and stuff lend an air of obliqueness to this poem? Thanks for sharing it!
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Short - but great image! There's not much else I can say, as this is short.....but well-done on the imagery!
thank you for your entry
best wishes in the contest
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