Lord, I feel so alone
I feel like going home
I'm tired and withdrawn
When your gone
I need you beside me
You sing my song and set me free
I've such an empty heart
when we're apart
There are heartaches colored red
and some black instead
A veil of gloom is in my eyes
that clouds all my skies
But, when you enter the room
My heart opens abloom
A ray of light
sometimes so bright
You take the shadows...from my life.
A contest entry
- Romantic love by Michael H..
600 points, ended November 21, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, this is really beautiful. Great rhythm and rhyme. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on the shiny. It's certainly worthy!
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thank you for sharing
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abs0;utely beautiful as I read this brought tears to my eyes as it is nearing the holidays and certainly speaks what a lot of us seel
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Absolutely beautiful. Thanks for entering.
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