Folded in half
In the pain that you caused me
I am now alone
Doubled over
Clenching my stomach
As your baby kicks
In the anger I feel
Author notes
fiction.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (D) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Oh this is short but strong. I can easily see and feel this scene played out. You've done a very good job of it here.
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wow this is really amazing, and in so few words you have captured such a feeling, i'm sure there are people who can relate to this, wow, best of luck in the contest
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