This way and that way and always
As long as they are your ways...
Pushing me down until my back breaks
And I'm crazy to stay
You promise me forever
But I'm not that flexible
I just can't handle forever
Author notes
I'm just not flexible enough to stay forever with you bending me the way you do. I'm sorry for not being the girl you can push around, but I guess you'll just have to get over it. ((again, this is fictional.. just wanted to expand the 40 words up above there))
A contest entry
- Bend by Pamela A Lamppa.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
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Comments
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Ahh, tis often the truth in love and relationships. Nicely done to the prompt and I did enjoy the expansion of verse below as well. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck. ~Pamela



