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what if i cant


oh
but what if i cant
what if i just cant let me go
to that place where i am ready
to become something else

i have sacrificed my children
my body
my breath
and my heart

my soul will not lend itself
long enough to pull on through
to what might become
one day later
when it needs every little thing
to just be where it is now

and how important is it
how important
to be able to let go
and jump

maybe there is a bridge somewhere
that is not as scary
and might just hold the weight of me all

if not i can always continue this way
without you

Author notes

8-The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles Dubois

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  • upperworld06
    November 24, 2008

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    yeah, this is sad, didn't understand why she/he was gonna jump until the end, then it was like BLAM lol. good job and good luck


  • george the 23rd
    November 21, 2008
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    What if you can? Heartbreaking and beautiful. The fire is with you today...