Heavy with fresh snow,
Crimson glass orbs dance in the
Arms of solid pines.
Author notes
Right, so I don't think this is my best haiku, but whatever. x3 I have the urge to write, and have done so to the best of my talents. Don't like it? Tough cookies.
...speaking of cookies... e e;;
UHH', yes. This was inspired by a picture that can be found on the main page of the contest it was entered in. I hope I did it some justice. 
A contest entry
- Christmas Haiku Quickie by carole21.
400 points, ended November 22, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nicely done . . thanks for the contest entry
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Shush lady.
This was lovely.
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Lol. //Shushes.//
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Creatively Done! Best wishes in life and the contest
In God's Love
Noah
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Thanks. =) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I really have to wonder what in Gods' name is wrong with you sometimes, woman.
I think this haiku is brilliant. You are such a detail mo'fo' and you can make ANYthing sound pretty! >/
I'm jealous.
BUT yes...this is beautiful, darling. ♥ You really need to stop being so hard on yourself. X3
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Lol. Don't be jealous? BECAUSE, I'm jealous of your rhyming skrills... and, like, two jealousies cancel each other out? x3 If not, I say we make it a rule!
But, mm'hmm; thank you for your kind words, love. ♥ Sometimes I wonder if I beat myself up about my work just so I can hear your praise.
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AHA! So THAT'S your evil plan!
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