I like your style
your elegance too
I love your expressions
you woo me so in two.
Your succulence wows
inherent intensity sweeps
bejumbled, humbled
a giant sleeps.
One thing you lack
you're one of a kind
"ditch the pack."
Author notes
your prompt is:
Bend -
A contest entry
- Bend by Pamela A Lamppa.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This just made me smile. Wonderful words and delightful rhythm to this prompt. A pleasure to read and enjoy. Thank you for such a delightful entry. ~Pamela
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cute take on the prompt . . good word choices . . well done for a brief write . . good luck in the contest !!
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I rarely use rhyme. This was very well done. At first I thought it was just one other love poem, but the ending hit me pretty hard. That was great ending. We are all unique but few manage to bring forth that uniqueness.
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For true, Victor, such is often the case
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LOL I like your style too and I like this poem. I find that we have been in the same contest quite a few times and I like that also. Good luck in this one and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Thank you so much, but my remarks on yours still stands (smile)
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