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they say

"your going to be drunk."

your point?

"your going to get sick."

wouldn't be the first time...

"you drink cause your lonely!"

i drink to forget!

"you need to slow down."

you need to be quite!

"your going to break something!"

your going to get me mad!

"your liver is going to give out."

your going to get thrown out!

"your an alcoholic!"

your an ass hole!

"whatever."

Author notes

i just get this alot.

what do they tell you?

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  • spirit rising
    December 16, 2008
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    i like this its got alot of emotion in it.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 21, 2008

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    i get that a lot myself, but normally it seems to drown out after a while, it is kind of funny, it guess it pays to drink while they are talking, keep it flowing