a red vine softened by slumber,
I take the shape of your body
cuddling in the curves of dreams
savoring the sweetness
of candy kisses
we welcome night’s repose
molded in harmony
to sleep in the warmth of our love
Author notes
40 words
A contest entry
- Bend by Pamela A Lamppa.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is soft, delightful and dangerously delicious. A wonderful take on this prompt and one that deserves attention.
a red vine softened by slumber - image beyond beauty in this line. I loved it. Very well done. Thank you for such a fine entry. ~Pamela
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so well done to the theme, a shape revealing of the physical and the emotional sides of us... wonderful...PK
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This is a spoon poem for sure, I vaguely remember how nice that was with someone that I loved.
This is very sweet and romantic.
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