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Disturb

Do you not see the sign on my front door?
I simply ask that you walk away and ignore.
See, I’m writing poems for a cool AP contest,
This does require that I be at my utmost best.
Unless you have a damn good reason to disturb,
Retrace your steps or surely you’ll perturb!
Be warned! I won’t hesitate to kick you to the curb!

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  • I like this one had be giggling. Especially the part about not looking your best... and kicking to the curb. Good job on the word usage. I really do like this one. Very creative. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.

  • cool, i love it, brought welcome laughter to my lonely place, fantastic piece. good luck in the contest


  • Amera gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Well I can say this littlt ditty isn't disturbing. You took the prompt and ran with it. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Rheea gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    This is perfect.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    l.o.l.

    funny, nice.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    I think this is cute! well done


  • Kari gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    rofllmfao this is so cute and funny...you're so right about this one heck this should be made into a door hanger


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Too cool! Yes, I do like this alot. It is very creative, written smoothly and I love the whole tone of the piece. Great job


  • wildfiredreamer
    November 21, 2008
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    cute I like your take on this one, sure made me smile
    good luck in the contest

    Rhonda


  • melphleg gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Gave me a smile. Thanks.

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