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Quest

Sitting in silent solitude
quietly
pondering the past

Your eyes eerily expressing
piercing
mirroring my own

Listening to light
soul
free for falling


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  • Rayne Dance
    September 14
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    LOVE IT!


  • Ryno
    November 30, 2008
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    YOUR BACK! YOUR BACK! YOUR BACK!


  • lemonhead
    November 24, 2008
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    Great job and welcome back


  • Akarian silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    GAH!!!! She is alive! FINNALY you wirte!

    I love it! Its short and so... Powerful. Pierces my mind and doesn't want to leave.

    Write more


    • purpledragonfly
      November 24, 2008
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      Thanks! Although I didn't like this piece, but it kinda wrote itself! : ) I will try to write more ! ! : )


  • Innocent Evil
    November 21, 2008
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    very nice use of alliteration


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Nice to read you once more...you are missed. I hope all is well!

    Love~
    Az

    • purpledragonfly
      November 24, 2008

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      Thank You! : ) I miss you!!!! I am going to FIND time to visit allpoetry again - even if I stink at the writing part... I miss reading!!! : )


      • SummerlandRayne gold member
        November 24, 2008
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        You are a wonderful and talented writer...and I for one miss you so much.

        Blessings my friend~
        Az

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