Three little boys jump high
t'wards where the berries hang,
Straying from mommy’s eyes,
into the woods where birds sang.
I see them jump in vain,
smiling at their theories,
making things simple and plain,
bending branches of tasty berries!
Author notes
First of all rhyme that makes my life difficult, and then to fit them it in 40 words??? This surely is a task!
Prompt - Bend
A contest entry
- Bend by Pamela A Lamppa.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 14 entries
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Interesting poem. I may have used the word toward instead of t'wards but still, lovely imaged presented in this poem.
I am partial too, to well written rhyme. Lovely entry. Thank you for this. ~Pamela
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"First of all rhyme that makes my lie difficult, and then to fit them it in 40 words??? This surely is a task!"
no task is to great for you man, you have been blessed with raw talent my friend. I hope you take it serious, you are seriously awesome.
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lolol Thanks, I just try my dear friend, Thanks for appreciating my work, it does make me feel very nice and inspired.
Much love,
Lencio
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