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Reflection (Haiku)

reflected red cheeks
light up Christmas memories
the child in me laughs



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Traditional Haiku
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: www.photobucket.com
Christmas Haiku

A contest entry

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  • Naughtygrlred
    November 23, 2008
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    great haiku, do you tanka?


  • TankA
    November 22, 2008
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    What a delightful vivid haiku, it is full of visions of past Christmases.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    this one I really really love. your words paint a picture.. one that seems happy.. though I must admit you make writing a Haiku look easy..lol been there, tried it and its not easy at all.. excellent job with this

    good luck
    kat

  • carole21
    November 22, 2008
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    nicely done . . thanks for the contest entry


  • Jesann gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    Delightful!!
    I love this.


  • daviscth silver member
    November 21, 2008
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    You have managed to instill such wonderful imagery in your poem. I love this. Good luck...


  • Three Doves
    November 21, 2008
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    enjoyed the read very much. Best wishes in life and the contest
    In God's Love
    Noah

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