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Come Expecting New Beginnings

It is never in our timing but His,
waiting for change is for good reason.
You are never too old for this,
we must go through steps in due season.
Hold on to what He has promised you,
it has been coming for quite sometime.
The floodgates of Heaven are opening soon,
you must be prepared and have everything align.
He has not been finished with you yet,
as long as you have breath another day.
Trust, Faith and Believing have to be met,
you are closer to what is on the way.
His ways are not ours to ignore,
where you think you should be may not be the plan.
Move on, go forward there is so much more,
take hold of His offer, there is a Promised Land.
  Change may be for protection
  Change may bring abundance
  Change may be for your selection
Embrace any beginning  as a chance.
I am sure we have known it to be true,
wether good or bad, it's one and the same.
Never too old to be what He desires of you,
if He said it, that settles it all in His name.
Accept when something quickly ends,
this means it's your season to relish in.
Something new is just around the bend,
out with the old, in with the new, allow it to begin.

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  • Majija
    March 7

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    Good poem. Especially the ending is really nice and have a good point. I enjoyed reading it.

    Thanks for entry. No winning. Your poem is more than 20 lines.


  • RareFlower
    December 6, 2008
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    Ohh that is lovely. So tender and gentle and sweet. Good luck in the contest


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    Awesome write here

    Yes I myself have told people what is keeping you where you so dont want to be for if it doesnt bring you joy in life move on and reach out and see the wonders of life is within your reach


  • penman gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Edited
    November 24, 2008

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    gives me hope it does. I'm just startibg to realise that my life is not of my own and my surrender will bring my eternal life.


  • Debbie Hansman
    November 23, 2008

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    I love this write....AWESOME. Your words stand so true!

    Thank you for sharing this

    debbie


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    You speak assuredly
    and with such great promise.

    Kudos to you
    for expressing your beliefs
    so firmly.

    M-C

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