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where can we sleep?

where to sleep...

maybe on the street.
no, that is no good.

maybe under the bridge.
no, needles will prick.

maybe over the ridge.
no, but where?

maybe behind the drug store
no, they'll need a prescription.

maybe the corner with the whores.
no, we might take their business .

maybe at a friends place.
no, we only have each other.

maybe up in outer space.
no, we missed the flight.

maybe we don't need to sleep
yes, we can do that.

maybe all we need is
the company we keep.
yes, just me and you.





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  • spirit rising
    December 16, 2008
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    nice, you say it all in the last stanza, lovely


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 21, 2008

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    *smiles* there is nothing that needs to be said about this poem other then that, keep it flowing my friend.